User talk:MirandaGoinss/sandbox

Peer review- Betheyr for MirandaGoinss
I can tell you are in the early stages of this, but I think you are going in a good direction. If you want pointers for places to start, I think you should add to the intro just slightly to adjust for new information. The sections you pinned as needing work are the ones that I would have thought needed work, so I think you are off to a good start. Here is the peer review template I filled out. I think this is looking really good so far. Betheyr (talk)