User talk:Mirandaa51o/sandbox/Baptism of Christ

The lead section of this article is well-organized and orderly. Great job moving content into applicable areas of the article as well. A suggestion for improving the lead section would be to add a sentence about the Subject Matter section in order to alert the reader that they will be learning about it later in the article. Another suggestion would be to add a citation to the second sentence Of the Lead section in order to give it credibility. The article has a very clear structure. The way it was re-organized makes logical sense and is easy to follow. The article appears well-balanced in what it covers. None of the sections overwhelm the others or seem disproportionate in length. Most of the article appears neutral, however the second paragraph of the History section seems somewhat biased since there are no citations yet. In order to make this section more credible, citations should be added. The sources appear reliable and varied for this article. I would also suggest correcting the grammatical errors throughout the article to give it more credibility. One last suggestion would be to clarify the second paragraph under Subject Matter since it is a bit difficult to follow. Overall the article is off to a great start! CSunflower30 (talk) 00:40, 19 October 2020 (UTC)CSunflower30