User talk:Mirandaboes/sandbox

I really liked how you included more about her early life. You said that Millicent and her siblings developed a closer relationship, and that she got especially closer to her sister Mary. Maybe just expand on that a little more. Also when you said that Hugh was dishonest and lied to Millicent, what did he lie about? Overall, this was really good! Ngaito (talk) 01:30, 27 November 2018 (UTC)