User talk:Mirandabrown/sandbox

Great start! Kaylauer520 (talk) 05:35, 27 November 2017 (UTC)
 * You need a title that is more like what a person would actually search for on wikipedia. Instead of Mississippi 1977.3.68 think of something more like Boxing Siana Cup by Sandal Painter or even something simpler than that.
 * Maybe explain overlap vs. double-decker in the vase shape section or move this to the decoration section since you mention it there as well.
 * This is super nit picky but "Each of these elements are typical of Greek warfare." should be "is" not "are" for the Side A section
 * "The warriors are sounded by figures that are described as spectators" Do you mean "surrounded" instead of "sounded"?
 * Great job overall though!