User talk:Mirandalgreen/sandbox

Hi Miranda!

I just reviewed your sources and general ideas about how you might use those sources for the childhood leukemia article. The sources are a great range and good, credible pieces to be working with.

My biggest suggestions for you as you continue working on this article are: --words! The big-picture ideas and the sources here are solid, but for peer review and the upcoming revision work, the most critical thing will be fleshing out actual sentences/paragraphs/sections to add to the article --for the EBSCO articles, you will want to either find a public version of them or use the permalink rather than CCC-specific URL (if you don't know how to get the permalink, let me know and I will show you how/where to find it)

Let me know if you get stuck or have questions, and I look forward to seeing the text you plan to add to this article! Nicoleccc (talk) 00:57, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

Hello Nicole,

Thank you, I have updated a few of the sections I was talking about with words. I added my phrasings of the article I was citing. I tried updating the reference list and adding the references after the information I was using. I am not sure if I did this right. The numbers seemed to be out of order when I published it. If you could please show me the permalink on the EBSCO articles that would be great!

Thank you, Mirandalgreen (talk) 21:29, 31 July 2018 (UTC)Miranda