User talk:Mirandalowe

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Hello, Mirandalowe, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Nice start on your draft article. One thing to bear in mind- Wikipedia articles don't start with an introduction - they start with a lead. The lead should begin with a concise statement of what the article is about, something like

Most people who read a Wikipedia article are interested in finding out what [x] is. They want to know as much as possible as quickly as possible. The first sentence should do this as best possible, and the lead section should provide a summary of the entire article. Beyond that, you'll expand on the material - people who want to know more can keep reading, but people who just want a brief overview or a reminder should be able to get that from the lead. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:54, 10 March 2016 (UTC)