User talk:Mirandawesley/Postpartum depression

derek peer reviewed your article

lauren peer reviewed! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 138.88.140.98 (talk) 16:53, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

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Let me know if you have questions or want to have a meeting to talk through of my suggestions below. Very excited for your contributions! Education Psychotherapy subsequent sections --Liliput000 (talk) 04:16, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
 * I think this can go after the Treatments subsection in the main article
 * I was expecting something a bit more basic like an actual centralized list with links to resources -- thinking about your user/reader, how you can make it more potentially helpful/usable -- would a bullet point approach be a possible route?
 * the footnotes currently bury the links to the resources for example, so at the very least following up your subsections with a links to outside resources list where you do hyperlink outside links would be a good idea
 * This section could use sub-headings even if they're short on content -- to help visually/cognitively organize it
 * It's possible that you can actually combine the bit about scientific motherhood and the one about Ms. Magazine into one sentence, and give us a sense of timeline and years/decades? and maybe for the instructional videos bit you can tell us it's since the early aughts or something like that?
 * cut the "Just like with most web-based resources..." sentence -- it's more "fluff"; also, cut "Educational resources can also take the form of government-funded programs that function on a larger, national scale. A prominent example in the US is" and begin at the point you're getting to.
 * there's a section on therapy in the treatments subsection so make sure you're not redundant and/or you may want to add your new content into that existing space
 * let's touch base about how to cite that pamphlet -- it's part of the DSM II AALR project as an "insert"