User talk:Miriandchavez/sandbox

You do a good job at providing a timeline saying what has been used in the past as a basis of good nutritional apps, graphs, etc. They are good but I assumed what they were so maybe before the timeline, say what you are presenting to the reader. I also like how you say what grains and protein do and what they help and are used for but in grains you have sentence format and for protein you have bullet format, so maybe you use the same format for both to make it look cleaner. Your content seems reliable but you have no sources that can say that they are neutral and reliable, so that would be a key step in this entry to make sure that you are not plagiarizing someone else's work. You say a lot of good about proteins and grains but maybe there are some negatives as well to sort of balance your work. Also maybe introducing vegetables, meat, etc. (JMott2 (talk) 14:00, 19 November 2019 (UTC))