User talk:Miss.Anieya/8th Ward of New Orleans

I have posted a peer review for your article.

I have reviewed your article. Inspiration 2.0 (talk) 19:26, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

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This is off to a nice start. You might want to slow down and explain some of the concepts that would be confusing for anyone outside of New Orleans. What is a ward? How is it different from a neighborhood? What is St. Roch? Don't just reference things -- explain them. Also, I'm not sure of your source, but the 8th Ward and the Lower 9th Ward are not the same things.

Your citations are a bit inconsistent. Looking at the "Tours" section (which needs a more appropriate name -- "Landmarks"?), it is clear that the first five sentences are from the olss-no.com web site, but what about the next four sentences? What source did they come from?

Let's think about the heading labels as well. Remember those should be precise to the content that follows them. "More Information" isn't helpful. If you are going to report on crime rates in that section, then "Crime Rates" would be better. If you are going to be more expansive, then something else will need to be considered.

Nice work so far!

jtodd1973 15:20, 8 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)