User talk:MissLadyLawless/Caroline Blue

Hi, I've see your request for feedback at the Help Desk but I thought I would answer you here. could see if it would be a good idea to link that article to this one, only if it gets accepted as an article.
 * Firstly, check your article aganst wikipedia's notability guidelines. If that works out, carry on.
 * Secondly, maybe get rid of the phrase " to name but a few ", it sounds a bit informal.
 * Next, and these are all up to you, remove maybe one of the people that 'WWJ' has been compared to.
 * If they are available add references to the other bands that were previous.
 * And finally, if there is a page for either the film or the production team that that song s being used for, link them in. Maybe then you

I hope this is some help Joe1000000 (talk) 16:42, 16 April 2012 (UTC)