User talk:Miss Pizarro

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Ways to improve Octavio Pizarro
Hi, I'm Mabalu. Miss Pizarro, thanks for creating Octavio Pizarro!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Nice article but please address the concerns raised by the tags.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. Mabalu (talk) 16:21, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi Mabalu, Thanks for reading my article. I do not earn money by writing on wikipedia. My pseudo is just for fun. 17:08, 31 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Hi Miss Pizarro! That's OK, just wanted to make sure that there was no conflict of interest as sometimes paid or PR editors use the name of their employer/client as an ID. The main problem is that there is a lot of close phrasing in your article, so please do think about rewriting the information in your own words as copyright violations need to be removed from Wikipedia if noticed. Also please do add more citations/references to reliable sources if you can, as it is good practice. Mabalu (talk) 22:47, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi Mabalu ! Thanks a lot for these explanations and your kindness. I'll rewrite this article today but I didn't know the website Eyesin (http://www.eyesin.com/article/lifestyle/fashion/octavio-pizarro-collection-expresses-deep-passion). Miss Pizarro 11:20, 1 November 2015 (UTC)