User talk:Missteeee/sandbox

Under Legacy, capitalize Mars Jessapf (talk) 19:57, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Under Awards, "Rohit won the Young Scientist Merit Award from the ISRO in 2007 for her contributions to their (change to the) Telemedicine program, (delete the comma) and the ISRO Team Excellence Award in 2013 for her work on INSAT 3D meteorological payloads." Jessapf (talk) 20:02, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Change though school to through school in early life section.Sa09 (talk) 20:00, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Also maybe add with after Space Applications Center in early life section. Sa09 (talk) 20:02, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Try to rephrase early life section so that it doesn't sound so repetitive. An example would be giving changing "she" to something else, so you don't read it over and over. M-felton (talk) 02:24, 19 October 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
Overall really good article, maybe add some more to her legacy section if you can bulk that up a bit. Emmarfren (talk) 15:11, 18 October 2017 (UTC)Emma French