User talk:MissusK/sandbox

This is the first writing I've done for Wikipedia. I would like a review and then help to move it to within the main Swan Hills article - will I just copy & paste? Also, I'm not sure how to fix the date problem in the references. MissusK (talk) 22:27, 4 August 2017 (UTC) A reviewer has rejected it as I didn't make it clear that it was to be added to an exiting article and it doesn't have a lead sentance. I replied to him, but I'm not sure I did that correctly! I'm so new at this. MissusK (talk) 15:09, 5 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi MissusK, if this was a new article then we recommend what you did before and submit for AfC review. The reviewer reviewed as a new article, so thus it would be missing a lead, but as this is a section that does not count. As this is a new section for Swan Hills then yes copy-paste is the best option. I fixed the date error for you. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 15:27, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

Thank you very much KylieTastic.--MissusK (talk) 15:32, 5 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi MissusK, no worries and to answer your final query: the reason Robert McClenon probably would not have have answered yet is you have to remember people work in different time-zones and have different real-life commitments. A good this to do is check the "User contributions" link on the left-hand menu on a users page to see if they are recently editing, and get an idea what times they edit. As you can see here from Roberts they stopped editing at 6:12am my time. You can also check the user page for hist, in this case it shows they are American. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 15:45, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

No much to learn! Thank you so much.--MissusK (talk) 15:49, 5 August 2017 (UTC)