User talk:Missy-Squishy 24/H’s LGBTQ+ Latina/o/x/e health communication, trans affirming health communication, and LGBTQ+ student organizing/Bibliography

A's Peer Review of H
As for the first source, it was published in 2009 in a Comm Studies journal and is 15 pages long. The second article was published in 2012 and is 13 pages long in a journal titled “Communication and Democracy.” The third source is from a Health Communication journal which is perfect for her topic, exactly 10 pages long and from 2016. Her fourth source is more recent (from 2021) from the same Health Comm. Journal as the third article. It is 13 pages long. Her fifth source is also from a Health Communication journal and it is 14 pages long with a publication date of 2013. The sixth source is very recent, with a publication date of 2023 but this doesn’t seem to be from a communication journal. It is also only 3 pages long. The seventh and last source is from the same journal (not a communication one), from 2023, and is 29 pages long. These last two need to be from communication journals in order to fit the requirement.

The DOI was used for every reference. Citations were used correctly as you can see all 7 sources mentioned in the references section.

As for the relation to her final 3 topics, the sources are relevant but not necessarily correct (in regards to the last two sources). She emphasizes the importance of her topics and how they relate to what she is covering. There are 2 sources for the first topic, 3 for her second, and 2 for the last one. This could use more information on why she chose the article specifically (i.e. what stood out), rather than what it could do for society in general. Audrat09 (talk) 19:06, 15 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey A,
 * Thanks for the feedback, I plan to change out my last two sources with communication journals to fit Dr. E's requirements for the assignment.I will do this by looking at the communication source database and making sure the word "communication" is located in the journals title. I will also look into adding a bit more on why I specifically chose these articles. Missy-Squishy 24 (talk) 17:26, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E's Review
H, great start here (especially with your thorough connections to the articles and your topics). As A notes in the feedback, some of these are not COMM sources. They are good sources (just not for this Communication Studies page). Please see Canvas and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. OsaRosa (talk) 06:05, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey Dr. E,
 * Thanks for the feedback. I plan on adding another source (a 3rd source) to the topic of LGBTQ+ student organizing. I also plan on adjusting the month/year to get rid of the red font within the references section. I will look specifically for communication journals to replace my last two sources with. Missy-Squishy 24 (talk) 17:29, 16 April 2024 (UTC)