User talk:MisterDub/sandbox1

Para 1
End of para 1 grammar item, is naming two concepts then says ",respectively, are" and one concept.... Think that should be "are, respectively," followed by two concept statements. e.g. "are, respectively not approachable by incremental steps and too complex to be the result of natural processes." Markbassett (talk) 16:36, 17 September 2013 (UTC)


 * Markbassett, the concepts I'm trying to link here are irreducible complexity (IC) to biological features, and complex, specified information (CSI) to (biological) information. There are two concepts on either side of the equation, but perhaps this isn't apparent due to the sentence structure.  Do you have a suggestion for rephrasing this?  Also, as a side note, my presence on Wikipedia will be very low in the coming three weeks, as I'll soon be leaving for vacation.  If you post and I don't respond, I promise I'm not ignoring you... I'm just away for a short time.  ;)  -- MisterDub (talk | contribs) 21:40, 17 September 2013 (UTC)