User talk:Misuki11/sandbox

Initial Feedback
Greetings! Your article is in really good shape. I had few pieces of feedback you might want to consider as you work on your article and get it ready to move over:


 * Your article is missing a WP:LEDE. You should write this section, according to the Wikipedia style guidelines, before you move it over.
 * Be careful with your use of "red links." Check out the policy on WP:REDLINKs to get a sense of when they would be appropriate. If it's just alternative descriptions of the same word, those probably should not be links.
 * Some of the English is a little rough. Proofread things carefully.
 * More citations from reliable sources (e.g., other encyclopedias, etc) might be useful.
 * The categories should probably not be in Chinese. Is this because you copied it over from Chinese Wikipedia? If so, you should be sure you add an inter-language link.

This looks like it's coming together. Keep working on it and move it over when you're comfortable with it. — m a k o ๛  22:38, 20 October 2016 (UTC)