User talk:Mitchellf689/sandbox

Peer review

I'm reviewing Mitchellf689's work. Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mitchellf689/sandbox

The user should include a summary of the context in the lead.

Yes, the content added is up to date and relevant.

Yes, the content added is neutral.

Yes the sources are reliable, but I think the article could be improved if the user used more scholarly articles, rather than heavily relying upon websites.

Yes, the content is well-organized.

I think that the addition of images would enhance this article.

Overall, I think that this is a very good draft. Ericaw5 (talk) 00:27, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Erica Wilson