User talk:Mitzijoyce

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ICCH224 Week 01
--Taweetham (talk) 02:38, 28 April 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 01:59, 4 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (May 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Robert McClenon were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Mitzijoyce/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to User:Mitzijoyce/sandbox, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User:Mitzijoyce/sandbox Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Robert_McClenon&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User:Mitzijoyce/sandbox reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Robert McClenon (talk) 11:05, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--Taweetham (talk) 15:55, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Mitzijoyce (talk • contribs) 12:17, 10 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Addition: Special:Diff/800992467/859368786
 * 2) Removal: Special:Diff/692758553/692790274


 * Thanks for submitting this assignment. I appreciate your attempt and ability to learn from this assignment. However, all of the three answers are not right. We allow you an opportunity to resubmit by the end of Sunday 12 May (UTC+7). --Taweetham (talk) 00:44, 11 May 2019 (UTC)

The second attempt to this assignemnt:


 * 1) Special:Diff/692670786/692671941 and Special:Diff/692958061/692958330 The warning message is WP:NOTTEXTBOOK in Ppraaeww(talk)


 * 1) Special:Diff/636831004/636834794 Edit warning on this talk page Myat T. Aung(talk)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Mitzijoyce (talk • contribs) 16:17, 12 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Special:Diff/689002505/689003404 Image deletion warning on this talk page U5680907(talk)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 00:18, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--Taweetham (talk) 00:18, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

— Preceding unsigned comment added by ‎ Mitzijoyce (talk • contribs) 12:05, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Proposed article(s) Acylsugar
 * 2) * The current article has only four divisions which are: Distrubution, See Also, References, and Further Readings.
 * 3) * I find the structure and existing contents appropriate, however they aren't sufficient enough.
 * 4) My contributions
 * 5) * Add more to the definition
 * 6) *Functions of acylsugar
 * 7) * Categories of acylsugar
 * 8) * References for the article:
 * 9) * for the picture maybe I'll take a photo of a tomato because acylsugar can be found in tomatoes.
 * 10) In terms of content and formatting: Phytochemicals
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Teetee taw (talk) 16:04, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Teetee taw (talk) 16:04, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

Here is the update on what I did User: ‎Mitzijoyce/My sandbox. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mitzijoyce (talk • contribs) 15:30, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! It is a good work. Please remember to use in-line citation and pay attention to the "citation needed" tag that I have added to your sandbox. --Taweetham (talk) 03:45, 25 May 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 05
--Taweetham (talk) 03:35, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Here is the link to the article Acylsugar — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mitzijoyce (talk • contribs) 11:25, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
 * ✅ Please pay attention to reference management. (1) Same reference should not appear several times in the reference list.  We can fix this by giving a name to the reference and call it by the name in later instances that you cite it. (2) In-line citation is preferred.  Please move references at the end of the article into ref tag in the text of the article. --Taweetham (talk) 01:30, 1 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 06
A volunteer has accepted to be your reviewer. The reviewer will be in contact with you shortly. --Taweetham (talk) 01:09, 1 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, I have read your contribution on the article already. I like the function part and it would be better to explain in more detail if possible. However, for the definition part which is divided into 2 paragraph, the first paragraph resembles the meaning already provided in the article and the second paragraph resembles the distribution part, so it is better merge the content with the meaning and distribution respectively instead of having separate part.--Teetee taw (talk) 03:52, 10 June 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for your suggestions, I have edited it already. -- Mitzijoyce (talk)

ICCH224 Week 07
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 05:49, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
For your information, the list below may be useful to you:

--Taweetham (talk) 01:46, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
 * Please fix your reference in the article page and integrate the further reading with reference part.--Teetee taw (talk) 09:34, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. I've also alphabetized my reference. Thank you for pointing it out. If there are more concerns please let me know. --Mitzijoyce (talk)

--Taweetham (talk) 04:29, 7 July 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) Please take care of the these orphaned references
 * 2) Please remove duplicate references.  I have done one example for you. See Special:Diff/905142529.
 * 1) Please remove duplicate references.  I have done one example for you. See Special:Diff/905142529.
 * 1) Please remove duplicate references.  I have done one example for you. See Special:Diff/905142529.
 * 1) Please remove duplicate references.  I have done one example for you. See Special:Diff/905142529.
 * 1) Please remove duplicate references.  I have done one example for you. See Special:Diff/905142529.


 * And also at the present, I am afraid that your current contributions are not reached 5,000 bytes, it is better to add more info --Teetee taw (talk) 04:59, 7 July 2019 (UTC)


 * How do I know how much I contributed? -- Mitzijoyce

ICCH224 Week 12
Congratulations! You have completed the work and the grade is now available on Canvas. --Taweetham (talk) 08:32, 16 July 2019 (UTC)