User talk:Mjelle2714/sandbox

Peer Review- Miranda Wilkerson
Your article is well written and thought provoking. I think adding a little more detail would be beneficia. Answer questions such as, why did Cortes want to burn or destroy his ships, and why is this such a controversial topic of conversation? Also you could change a few words to make is seem like more of an encyclopedia article and less of an essay.

Emily Trumble-
The article flows well, but make sure references are placed where they should be.

Peer Review--Emily Tran
Try to get more information on the burning of the ship, and talk about each of his ships if its possible. You could probably talk about Cortes relationship with the king of Spain. If you could find information about how he treated his men since you talked about how they were angered by him burning the ships. You could talk about the history of his ships. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Entran5820 (talk • contribs) 15:19, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Cassidy's Peer Review
You have great information to contribute. In the original article you said that it was unbiased because they were close to Cortez, maybe you could look into seeing if it's biased because they were close to him. Or look into why the peoples accounts differ from each point of view depending on there perception. Overall your information you have drafted to contribute seems unbiased and well thought out with good vocabulary. -Cassidy Childs — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cechil (talk • contribs) 15:28, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Response to Peer Reviews- Sadie Eller
I appreciate the feedback and tried to incorporate all information, or make any changes, that were suggested.