User talk:Mjh1730

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 * On a more personal note, you should be able to verify notability from independent sources. For example this one, this one, and these. However, when the article is accepted, it will probably be heavily edited by other editors to remove the promotional language currently in it. I'd suggest that you forestall that by re-working it now. I have long experience of editing articles in this area. PR-type hype can be spotted a mile a way, and believe it or not, actually detracts from the subject's reputation rather than enhancing it. Simply write a neutral dispassionate description of the subject's life and career and let the (well-referenced) facts speak for themselves. This type of article is often written by someone with an affiliation to the subject, either personal or professional. If this is the case here, have a look at this page for guidance when editing under those circumstances. Best wishes, Voceditenore (talk) 15:06, 5 April 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Alisdair Hogarth concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Alisdair Hogarth, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Alisdair Hogarth was accepted
 Alisdair Hogarth, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! DGG (at NYPL) -- reply here 19:50, 10 July 2014 (UTC)
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