User talk:Mjoung

Your submission at Articles for creation: Campus Mission Church (New York City) (July 23)
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LaMona (talk) 00:07, 23 July 2016 (UTC)

Username policy and COI
Hello, User:Cmcnyc.media. Wikipedia does not allow usernames that 1) represent an organization rather than an individual and 2) that might be used (now or in the future) by more than one person. Follow the instructions at Wikipedia:Changing_username, in particular see the fourth point under "Alternatives to consider."

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Hello, Cmcnyc.media. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places, or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic, and it is important when editing Wikipedia articles that such connections be completely transparent. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, we ask that you please:


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LaMona (talk) 00:10, 23 July 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Campus Mission Church (New York City) (August 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mz7 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Mz7 (talk) 04:53, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City). Thanks! Mz7 (talk) 22:10, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City)
Hi Mjoung. At Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City), you wrote, Thousands of past CMC members are dispersed throughout the US as well as many countries in Europe, Asia, and Africa. Hundreds of them live in Seoul, Korea and gather occasionally, calling themselves 'CMC Seoul.' However, you didn't provide a reference to a reliable source that verifies this claim. I want to see this article published, and I think that if you can verify this statement, it would push it just past the edge.

Additionally, I removed one of the sources you added that was a link to a YouTube video. Generally, YouTube videos are not reliable sources for Wikipedia articles because anyone can publish a YouTube video and post what they want. In this case, the video seems to host content that was created by a Korean news agency. There is no indication, however, that the YouTube channel that hosted the video is the official YouTube channel of the news agency, or that the news agency authorized the channel to host the video. Therefore, the video may constitute a copyright infringement, and I have removed it just to be safe. Mz7 (talk) 23:02, 2 September 2016 (UTC)

Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:35, 30 October 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City) concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City), a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:34, 5 May 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Campus Mission Church (New York City)


Hello, Mjoung. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Campus Mission Church".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:38, 5 June 2018 (UTC)