User talk:Mjwill46

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sherry F. Colb (April 21)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gregory S. Alexander (April 23)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Stewart J. Schwab has been accepted
 Stewart J. Schwab, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 00:49, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Eduardo Peñalver has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Valerie Hans has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert C. Hockett has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jens David Ohlin (July 15)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Yale-Loehr (October 22)
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LaMona (talk) 20:36, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Nomination of Robert C. Hockett for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Robert C. Hockett is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Robert C. Hockett until a consensus is reached, and anyone is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. LaMona (talk) 15:28, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Gregory S. Alexander concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Gregory S. Alexander, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Draft:Sherry F. Colb concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Sherry F. Colb, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Draft:Gregory S. Alexander


Hello, Mjwill46. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Gregory S. Alexander".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  samtar { t } 09:38, 18 November 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Sherry F. Colb


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Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Yale-Loehr (November 30)
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Draft:Jens David Ohlin concern
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Yale-Loehr has been accepted
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Status and Advice
Since I have an interest in academic biographies, I went to the trouble of rewriting this in the proper style. Note the following: 1.Press releases give the bio part at the end; `1e articles give it at the beginning. For WP, you need to start off first with a biographical section, giving their birthplace and a date, schools and dates from high school on, positions and dates, all in chronological order, not inverse chronological order. This has to be in the text, not just the infobox. Then a section describing their research, linking not just to their own work but to articles about their work from other people as well.

2. If their notability depends mainly on published books, list every such book, linking to their description in WorldCat, not the publisher or Amazon. Include links to reviews--published reviews in reliable sources (I usually try to give every such review I can find in an academic journal of major reliable publication like the NYT.) (I did not do this part--I leave it to you)   We normally do not include articles if there are also numerous books, unless there is one or two of special importance.

3. Do not make pseudo links by saying "he was an editor of [X publication www.whatever]; this  gives the false impression that X publication has a WP article. Write it as  He was an editor of X publication [http.whatever]

4. That someone called a person an expert is not a good way of showing he is; rather, the accomplishments should show it,as they do here. Just include them. It gives a much stronger article and doesn't sound like a press release.

5. When you have a conflict of interest, you must declare it. I added a minimal template for this, but if you are paid to write this, you dneed to say so specifically according to our our Terms of Use, particularly with respect to paid contributions without disclosure. This is not optional.

You probably need to revise your earlier work with respect to the above points. I shall check back in a few days to make sure you have done that. I'm not about to spend my time as a volunteer writing properly the articles you are (presumably) being paid to write. I did some of it it just this once as an example.  DGG ( talk ) 04:34, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jens David Ohlin


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 23:14, 3 February 2016 (UTC)

December 2016
Hello, I'm Zackmann08. Thank you for your recent contributions to Robert C. Hockett. I noticed that when you added the image to the infobox, you added it as a thumbnail. In the future, please do not use thumbnails when adding images to an infobox (see WP:INFOBOXIMAGE). What does this mean? Well in the infobox, when you specify the image you wish to use, instead of doing it like this:

SomeImage.jpg

Instead just supply the name of the image. So in this case you can simply do:

SomeImage.jpg.

There will then be a separate parameter for the image caption such as Some image caption. Please note that this is a generic form message I am leaving on your page because you recently added a thumbnail to an infobox. The specific parameters for the image and caption may be different for the infobox you are using! Please consult the Template page for the infobox being used to see better documentation. Thanks! Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 20:53, 2 December 2016 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Mjwill46. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places, or things you have written about in the article Robert C. Hockett, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic, and it is important when editing Wikipedia articles that such connections be completely transparent. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, we ask that you please:


 * avoid editing or creating articles related to you and your family, friends, school, company, club, or organization, as well as any competing companies' projects or products;
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In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Please take a few moments to read and review Wikipedia's policies regarding conflicts of interest, especially those pertaining to neutral point of view, sourcing and autobiographies. Thank you. Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 21:03, 2 December 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Saule Omarova (January 6)
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SwisterTwister  talk  18:07, 6 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Also note that biographical articles should be in chronological order, whereas this draft is in inverted chronological order. This is a biography, not a resume. Background and education come first, then career highlights in the order they occurred; likewise for publications. -- Orange Mike  &#124;  Talk  00:30, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Mjwill46/sandbox/Saule Omarova


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 05:21, 6 February 2018 (UTC)