User talk:Mjwng/New Culture Movement

Yanjun-Liu3 (talk) 19:59, 25 October 2020 (UTC) I think the content in your "History" section is very good and the description of the new cultural movement is very clear. However, I think the logic between these two paragraphs is not very strong. It is like two independent parts, rather than both of them belong to "History". You can modify the beginning of a paragraph appropriately to strengthen the connection between the paragraphs. But that's just my opinion, and you can think about it as a suggestion.

Ldc30507 (talk) 20:36, 27 October 2020 (UTC) Hello, I think you did a really good job on the history part, you also included lots of useful details like the name of the magazines. I encourage you to add more aspects of information to your article, like the further influence of New culture movement to make your article more complete. And to add some subtitles to make your article more organized.