User talk:Mjwng/New Culture Movement/Yanjun-Liu3 Peer Review

Yanjun-Liu3 (talk) 20:27, 24 October 2020 (UTC) I think the content in your "History" section is very good and the description of the new cultural movement is very clear. However, I think the logic between these two paragraphs is not very strong. It is like two independent parts, rather than both of them belong to "History". You can modify the beginning of a paragraph appropriately to strengthen the connection between the paragraphs. But that's just my opinion, and you can think about it as a suggestion.