User talk:Mkabbara12/sandbox

Peer Review - Ali B.
I think you all did a great job with the character descriptions. I think you did a good job of succintly describing the characters in a sentence. I agree with Josh that the pronouns could probably be deleted, but its not a big thing. I'd consider adding a link to Jupiter's name that re-directs to the "Jupiter (Mythology)" page. I think all the additions to the "Performance History" section are great and really help to flesh out that section of the article. For Belarius, Guiderius, and Arvirargus I'd consider following the character list in the Arden edition by having their real names and their pseudonyms separated by a "/" rather than mentioning them in the description.