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Mkcheek Peer Review
You've selected some dense material; that's good, as it gives you options. Some thoughts on what you might edit when you begin working on the selected passages:

In many emerging markets, the influence of banking and financial capital have come to increasingly shape national developmental strategies, leading some to argue we are in a new phase of financial capitalism.

Who are "some" people? This needs elaboration and citation (if absent). The same criticism goes for the following:

State intervention in global capital markets following the financial crisis of 2007–2010 was perceived by some as signaling a crisis for free-market capitalism.

Be intolerant of the overuse of necessary adverbs such as "extremely," "very," and "severely." The use of such words in concise writing only clutters the work and risks coloring the writing with a biased slant, regardless of the author's intention.