User talk:Mknoll01

December 2022
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Mass shootings in the United States, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Liliana UwU (talk / contribs) 21:29, 15 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Sorry I am new to this and did not notice that I was deviating from a specific style. I have an assignment for class to post on a wikipedia article of my choice with research that I collected to help improve the article. Did my edits get erased again or have they yet to be approved? I do not know how to tell. Thank you for letting me know and providing me some resources to look at! Mknoll01 (talk) 21:36, 15 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Hmm... the problem I currently have with the whole shebang is how it reads like an opinion piece. If I were you, I'd use User:Mknoll01/sandbox to copy your text in there so you can tweak it. Liliana UwU  (talk / contribs) 21:41, 15 December 2022 (UTC)

NPOV
Thanks for your contributions on Mass shootings in the United States. I'm sure you put some effort into this. However, Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and as such, it is neutral in its point of view. See WP:NPOV for our guidelines on this. Encyclopedias present information and facts. They do not present arguments either for or against a position. Your submission is that of a persuasive argument, which is more suitable to an editorial site (see WP:NOTOPINION). Butler Blog  (talk) 21:39, 15 December 2022 (UTC)