User talk:Mlove10/Aragonese dialects/Daisyhelmuth Peer Review

- Make sure that throughout the article it's clear what's a heading and what's the start of a sentence or paragraph. For example, add bold text to the first words. - Add some kind of way to clarify the lists provided, like dashes or bullet points. Without this it's a little difficult to separate the lists from the rest of the article and they get lost within it. The lists later in the article have bullet points and it's much easier to read. - The article is neutral and seems to be unbiased. - The lack of citations throughout the article should be remedied, as it isn't clear where the information is coming from or how factual it is. - There was nothing distracting information wise in the article, but it just needs some more clarification with how it's edited (i.e. the headings being bold, the lists being bulleted.) Daisyhelmuth (talk) 20:00, 18 October 2021 (UTC)Daisy H

Peer review 2

The addition of the citations was the only thing that I felt was extremely lacking last time, so great job! The lists are much clearer and easier to read, the neutrality of the information remained the same (a good thing) and the change in the headings to bold font helped to clarify the structure of the article in a huge way. The citations are informative and accurate. At this point the only thing that I think that the article needs are some more citations to further prove the points being made. For example, where did the information about the Western and Eastern Poles come from? Great job! Daisyhelmuth (talk) 20:24, 1 November 2021 (UTC)Daisy H