User talk:Mmalembo

September 2015
Hello, I'm Hermionedidallthework. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Moïse Katumbi seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Your edits used wording that seemed to promote the subject rather than discuss him dispassionately. Hermionedidallthework (talk) 16:16, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Hello, Well if you have a look at the references (Financial Times, Huffington Post, The Economist, Reuters,...) I think it's quite well shared. Can you tell me exactly what parts were "not neutral"? thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mmalembo (talk • contribs)
 * Just as a note, please sign (with " ~ ") and indent your posts on talk pages. It's a common mistake, but signing and indenting the page helps people read it more clearly and tell who said what.
 * The problem I saw with your edits aren't so much the sources, but the tone that your prose was written in. Please review the guidelines for editing Biographies of Living Persons at WP:BLP as this is a particularly sensitive issue. Articles shouldn't be written in a way that either disparages or props up the subject. Neutrality is the goal. Particularly, I found your phrases "has thrived in the fishery business", "with over 100,000 votes in his favor", and "recognized for numerous results and having developed Katanga greatly", to seem a little to promotional to the subject. Basically, try focusing on the bare facts without sounding too much like an advertisement.
 * Now that I've stated my reasoning, I will leave it be. If you want to re-introduce your edits, you could always request for a review of your article at WikiProject Biography/Peer review. Perhaps they will disagree with me! —Hermionedidallthework (talk) 17:11, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
 * well the problem is that I have lost all my edits now and it took me a lot of time; I understand your remarks on the tone. Well if I reedit (actually it's merely adding some infos - keeping a neutral tone, will you delete again? Thank you MmalemboMmalembo (talk) 12:27, 18 September 2015 (UTC)
 * If you go and click "edit", you will be able to see the source code from your earlier work. No, I won't revert your edits, but I still highly recommend working with the WikiProject Biographies folks, just to make sure everything is on the up-and-up. Thanks for your understanding! —Hermionedidallthework (talk) 13:25, 18 September 2015 (UTC)