User talk:Mmanuba/sandbox

Assignment 3, Feedback
Hey there, hope you don't mind that I have reviewed your draft. I found your article to be really fascinating, you write very well and it is easily understood. I would love to see more subheadings, if there is a sufficient amount of research collected to allow for it. Also, some of your references seem a bit repetitive, or maybe I'm just reading it wrong, but not sure. Anyhow, great job so far! April pat (talk) 17:14, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi Mmanuba! For the feedback: You've done great job for those 3 subheadings, Taxonomy, Description, and pathogenicity. Very informative! But I think you could add few more information about the fungus. I think you could look up more cases that the fungus caused disease. If there's any cases that the fungus caused disease on human, etc, except reptiles. Maybe I'm focused on human too much.. I don't know.. Maybe your fungus is only for reptile. Haha. Also, I think you could use some visual aids, some fungus pictures. Professor said he has few/many pictures, you should ask him too! Good luck with the rest of the assignment + courses!! :) choemin99 (talk)

I am sure you will editing and improving your article in the future. But, could you describe this fungus in culture (time, temperature, colors, texture). And where is this fungus is found originally (besides in animals and/or humans)? Hhhzzzani (talk) 02:08, 2 November 2013 (UTC)