User talk:Mmwilli/sandbox

Thanks for evaluating the article! Great job! BootsGordon (talk) 14:37, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

I am writing on your talk page. BootsGordon (talk) 18:25, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
You have a substantial amount of new information here! I like your organization of ideas which you would like to implement in the article you've chosen. The next step is to start converting your bullet points into organized paragraphs and edits. I can't tell how much of the bulk of the information in your sandbox was edited, so I can't really say how well you've edited or how well written your paragraphs are. Ktack (talk) 23:57, 6 October 2018 (UTC)

Brett's Peer Review
So I saw in your sandbox that you already have a lot of information about Wilbur Ross. While it is important to look at the people who effect public opinion it would help to look at policies that are either hindering or helping public opinion with same-sex marriage. In your sandbox you said the article is very vague but what are examples on how you could improve upon the article. You could talk on the Supreme Court case that made same-sex marriage legal as well. I would also think that talking on the movemnts of lgbtq+ that help shape opnion on this topic. Who are important leaders that helped with this movement. Since this is a blank article there are many possibilities that one can go about writing this article. While Wilbur Ross can help with negative sentiments about same-sex marriage I think he should be an after thought on who is oppressive of the topic. I think it would greatly appreciate the article to focus on policy that help same-sex marriage, history of the topic, people who helped/hindered the topic of same sex marriage, and lastly even were state policies concerning same-sex marriage.--BrettLance11 (talk) 19:39, 17 October 2018 (UTC)