User talk:Mnamiki

Diary

Mon Jan 7th: 9:00-10:00pm, wiki tutorial and practice 1 hr

Mon Jan 21st: 4:30-10:00pm, read "Washington State Department of Ecology" web page. Read "Coastal Watershed Factsheets" web page. Edited "Changing Shorelines" and "Coastal Watershed" sections. 5.5 hrs

Sun Feb 3rd: 6:30-9:15pm, read "Will global climate change worsen infectious diseases?" pubs.acs.org/subscribe/journals/esthag-w/2006/mar/science/jp_climatechange.html and "Researchers explore effects of climate change on health" http://www.goskagit.com/index.php/news/article/climate_health/. Edited the "Human Health" section. I focused on cutting down wordy sentences and any unnecessary information. I also added new information from the readings. 2.75 hrs

Mon Feb 18th: 9:00-11:00pm, edited the Human Health section. I concentrated more on cutting unnecessary information and shortening wordy sentences to shrink the section. 2.0 hrs

Sun Feb 24th: 10:30-12:00pm, edited the Yakima Valley section. I mainly cut out wordy sentences and irrelevant information. I was able to cut out 3 lines of the final section to make it shorter and easier to read. I also went back to the Human Health section. Since there was much information regarding other states and countries besides Washington State, I tried to cut out as much irrelevant information as possible. 1.5 hrs

Fri Feb 29th: 7:00-8:00pm, edited the Greenhouse Gas Emissions section. This section had a few grammatical and spelling errors that I fixed. I also worked on compacting sentences and deleting a few lines to make this section shorter and easier to read. 1.0 hr

Sat Mar 1st: 8:45-10:45pm, edited the Outdoor Recreation section. I thought 1 section was irrelevant and was cut out. 2.0 hrs

Mon Mar 10th: 8:30-10:30pm, edited the Human Health section. There was a comment that stated one of the sentences didn't make sense because of information or the way it was written. I reworded the sentence and tried to fix the rest of the section by looking to see if other parts didn't make sense. I again worked on cutting out unnecessary information to shorten it, and clarify other parts of the section. 2.0 hrs

Tue Mar 11th: 7:00-9:30pm, edited the Human Health section and the Outdoor Recreation section. I worked on making sure the information was easy to understand and that the sentences flowed together. I also fixed grammatical and spelling errors, and cut out any unnecessary words. 2.5 hrs

Mon Mar 17th: 9:30-10:30, edited the Coastal Management section. There was a suggestion to fix the quote paragraph, but since it wasn't very relevant to the section, I cut it out and shortened the section. I read through the rest of the section and fixed little mistakes and cut a line out to compact the section more. 2.0 hrs