User talk:MngtandCo

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I've uploaded that file for you. ˜danjel [ talk &#124; contribs ] 06:39, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

Castle Hill High School
G'day. I made a couple of changes to the article after you went through. (1) I removed some unnecessary competitiveness from the lead, as there's no need to set up a comparison in the opening paragraph; (2) I removed some non-neutral language from co-curricular section, as neutrality is very important on wikipedia; and (3) the categories down the bottom of the page are necessary to make sure that the article is included in appropriate lists elsewhere on wikipedia and the external link, because this is standard practice on wikipedia.

There is one area where the article can be substantially improved (besides adding more content): referencing. Wherever there is a claim made, you can reference by using (or equivalents for other types of citations).

I'm keen to help. Get in touch if you need anything. ˜danjel [ talk &#124; contribs ] 08:05, 11 August 2012 (UTC)