User talk:Mnguyenn96

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Respond to peer review
Jackie's review: Thank you so much for your comments! I will make sure remove any biased phrases in my drafting and add more sources. For the sector article, I am planning to add more sentences that relate to civic participation and how it can be regarded as one of the social determinants of health in poverty.