User talk:Mnwashington/sandbox

The assignment
Looks good Amcampbell2 (talk) 16:08, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Hailey Burns
Hello! Overall, your article looks like it is coming along nicely! I do have a few suggestions about how you can improve your draft. First, I am not 100% sure what your topic is, since the Wiki Education Dashboard cuts off your title. Adding a clear, concise title to your draft would definitely improve the clarity. Regarding your citations, having more than one citation is always a good thing! Also, I believe you can cite them in a way to only have the number 1 in multiple positions rather than all 5 references in the bottom being the same (that way you only have 1 reference rather than 5 of the same). I appreciate the photos you added, and your additions seem very chronological, which is great! Other than adding more information to your sections, it looks like your article is off to a great start. Hvburns (talk) 23:56, 16 March 2018 (UTC)Hvburns