User talk:Mobetman

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Edward Ray article
Hi Mobetman,

For your Edward Ray article (Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Edward_Ray), I fixed your headings by putting to 'equals' signs before and after your titles to make them appear properly, like in other articles.

I suggest that you go through the article and redo your wikilinks so that each link doesn't end up having one set of square brackets around it as current. The problem is that each of your wikilinks resolves to a dead page. On Wikipedia, you don't need to insert the URL (i.e. the www.wikipedia.com/wiki/______) reference into the wikilink. Just putting the 2 square brackets around the words will suffice to direct wikipedia to a page of the same name. For example (you might want to look at the code I'm writing in the 'Edit' section of this talk page), I would put Franklin, North Carolina, not [|Franklin, North Carolina]. As you can see in the regular 'read' section of your talk page, clicking on the second link dead-links whilst the first is the valid intra-wikipedia link.

If you are trying to link to a page with a particular name but it's page name doesn't suit the sentence you are writing (for example, wanting to link to 'Busways in Brisbane' but you're trying to link to it in the context of 'The Brisbane Busway Network is over 25 km long'; you'd write (check out the source code here too) Brisbane Busway Network, so the words after the ' | ' are written but it links to the first named page. This is called 'piping'.

I notice you have piped all your links, which is good, but it will dead link because of the way you've done it. Just square bracket the word/s you want to wikilink too and only pipe the link if you want to not display the name of the page, but some other words which link to it anyway.

If you don't change the wikilinks in your Edward Ray article so that they link properly, you're article will be declined. I don't think another editor without a vested interest in the subject will be kind enough to redo tem all

Good luck! J.s.071991 (talk) 14:10, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Edward Ray Article
Good day.

In fact there was another editor out there who was willing to redo all your links to wikipedia articles. I have corrected them all and can provide the following help to you for the next article you write.

Many of your links to wikipedia articles appeared like this B.B. King  (click edit on this message to see the underlying format) - In this example the round bracket after the first King is unnecessary and will stop the link from working correctly.  As well, it is unnecessary to pipe this link.  It would have been sufficient to simply type B.B. King (again, click edit on this message to see the underlying format). I haven't removed all of these unnecessary words before the pipes because they don't prevent the link from working.  I only mention it to save you some time in the future.

Have a great day! --Snowysusan 08:46, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Edward Wiley Ray, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Snowysusan 10:13, 30 August 2012 (UTC)
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Edward Wiley Ray
Hi Mobetman. I just wanted to say "well done" for writing such a good article about a truly notable person. I'm glad you included photos, as well. Nice contribution. TalkSnowysusan 03:24, 2 September 2012 (UTC)