User talk:Moblit

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Colonial Nigeria Influenza (4/1/21) Peer Review
This is a good start to adding a new section to a pre-existing article. I have a few recommendations on how to set up the section on Influenza. I would hyper link the main Wikipedia page on the influenza pandemic to your section so the viewer will be able to easily access general information about the disease if they do not know. Another recommendation would be to shorten your section title from "Influenza pandemic of 1918 in Colonial Nigeria" to "Influenza pandemic of 1918". I believe this would make the section title more concise since the main article is called Colonial Nigeria. I would also consider changing or removing the word "officially" because to me it implies that the flu may have arrived there before September and it is debated about. If that is the case I would try to add that without getting too off topic. Eruss5 (talk) 22:42, 1 April 2021 (UTC)