User talk:Mochimeadows/sandbox

I really enjoyed your article! I think it is important to expand on the information regarding cross dressing in America, and is especially cool that you were able to tie it into our class discussions. Some things that I noticed were just about citations. Make sure that they are cited as footnotes and not at the end in brackets. I wasn't able to check your sources, other than the wiki links that you added. Also your last paragraph about females involvement should have some citations as well. Other than that, it is very well written and provides a lot of content that was missing! Devon Matson (talk) 16:27, 19 November 2020 (UTC)