User talk:Modernsappho

Feedback on your work!
Hi, Modernsappho! Just took a quick look at your edits to the Erich Heckel article, and I wanted to suggest you add some additional sections to the text currently listed as "Biography," so as to break up that big wall of text and make it a bit more accessible. :) Since the entire article is his biography, you may want to separate some sections into art, life, major works, etc. :) If you want some ideas, I like to look at other similar articles (another artist) to see how others have organized those. I'd also suggest you expand the lead paragraph a bit, which should summarize the rest of the article. In other words, perhaps mention some of his better-known works? (also check the spelling of the word 'critical' in one of your headings). Hope that helps! JMathewson (WMF) (talk) 19:21, 13 November 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: User:Modernsappho/sandbox (December 16)
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December 2013
Hello, I'm Valenciano. I noticed that you recently removed some content from Erich Heckel without thoroughly explaining why. In the future, it would be helpful to others if you described your changes to Wikipedia with an accurate edit summary. If this was a mistake, don't worry: I restored the removed content. If you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks! Valenciano (talk) 18:37, 16 December 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Heckel concern
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Heckel


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 12:00, 21 July 2014 (UTC)