User talk:MoetDaPoet/sandbox

For the section regarding current terminology, it might be better to stress that the disorder only applies if the people are unconsenting or it causes the person problems. I know that you added that part near the end of the paragraph but wording it a little differently might make it easier to understand that it ONLY applies to the folks for which this behavior is causing problems.

Make sure to make subheadings! It is a little hard to see that paraphilic coercive disorder isn't sexual sadism disorder.

In the features section make sure to reiterate that since most of the research on sexual sadism disorder is done on males this statistic might be inaccurate (I saw that you mentioned it a few lines earlier which was good).

Where are the rest of your citations! I only see 2 and one is a website for a clinic.

In the Typology section it would be a little better to have more subheadings with one or two sentences for each type of sexual sadist.

Are the names supposed to be hyperlinked? If they are, make sure to add the links in the sandbox and the page. Reliablesourceconnoisseur (talk) 00:05, 12 November 2019 (UTC)

in the diagnoses section it might be good to add that only a licensed psychologist can diagnose a person with this disorder.Reliablesourceconnoisseur (talk) 00:07, 12 November 2019 (UTC)