User talk:Mogrinz

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rushton2010 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

The exact wording of those messages is already chosen for us which is highly frustrating at times. But the problem is what it says; there isn't enough context in your introduction. The basic reader that stumbles upon the page is most likely to think what the hell. Unless you have a high level of computer knowledge you are not going to know what any of it means or even what it is on about. The whole article doesn't have to be at "baby level"; but introductions should be written in such a way as to introduce the subject and introduce what the article is about. Take a look at some similar technology based articles: the article for HTML for example, or even the API one itself: they give sufficient introduction and context for the everyday reader to grasp what the subject is and what the article is about. (the in-depth stuff is then left for the article itself. Your article really relies on people having read the API article first. -articles need to be able to stand alone.

If not, you could consider using your article as text for a new section or series of chapters in the main API page; it would fit very comfortably there.

Rushton2010 (talk) 22:18, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Synthetic API concern
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Synthetic API


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 18:24, 27 January 2014 (UTC)