User talk:Mohdw04

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Omar Wari
Hello. I moved this to the article namespace per your request at Commons. However, you did not add any sources at all to the article to back up the claims. Please add a few reliable sources to the statements made in the various sections of the article as is good practice at Wikipedia. De728631 (talk) 18:07, 28 September 2022 (UTC)

Omar Elwary moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Omar Elwary, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 04:12, 29 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Omar Elwary (September 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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KylieTastic (talk) 14:01, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Omar Elwary has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Omar Elwary. Thanks! S0091 (talk) 19:48, 30 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks! Mohdw04 (talk) 20:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
 * @S0091, i tried to look at the guide and didn't really understand how to use the citing.
 * as for the gallery, i agree wikipedia is not a gerllary, but its important for old pages as they were before global digitization revolution Mohdw04 (talk) 06:20, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * See my sandbox for an example of an in-line citation. You will need to add citations for all substantive claims made.  If you did not find the guide helpful, you can try WP:REFBEGIN.  As far as gallery, that is non-negotiable as it is against Wikipedia policy.  If you have questions or need help, you can ask at the Teahouse.  S0091 (talk) 14:32, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Omar Elwary (October 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 08:11, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


 * @Theroadislong
 * Thank you for taking the time reviewing the article.
 * I dont understand the reason why it was declined, please state the specific reason so i can handle it. Otherwise the article should be approved.
 * The best way is to simply list bullet points with each reason, then i will answer each bullet point with whatever you need.
 * This is of course for the sake of transparency of freedom of information and knowledge.
 * Thanks,
 * Mohammad Wari Mohdw04 (talk) 08:43, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I have also just checked old pages from the era of 1950, which is before the digital world, similar discussion with approved pages appeared. Mohdw04 (talk) 08:47, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * one more note, make sure to check the resources i could find online and added at the end of the article along with the gallary:
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Omar_Elwary#References Mohdw04 (talk) 08:55, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Your draft has no inline citations so it is not possible to assess whether the sources support any of the content. Theroadislong (talk) 09:03, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * hi @Theroadislong, i added cites as requested. Mohdw04 (talk) 18:40, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Omar Elwary (October 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

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S0091 (talk) 19:47, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


 * @S0091, yes Elwary is Al-Waari, or Wari as i wrote it for myself. In the link you sent ,its written as Omar Wa'ari.
 * I really don't understand why its not yet approved.
 * What information do you see not cited? I can remove it for the sake of Mayor of East Jerusalem as stated in the link you sent. Mohdw04 (talk) 20:28, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * You ask "What information do you see not cited?" there are at least seven whole sections which are totaly unsourced! Theroadislong (talk) 20:31, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * OK. i removed info that is not cited.
 * So now, mayor of east jerusalem has source:
 * 1. https://www.worldstatesmen.org/Israel_Jerusalem.html
 * 2. http://dspace.hebron.edu/jspui/bitstream/123456789/772/1/%D8%A8%D9%84%D8%AF%D9%8A%D8%A9%20%D8%A7%D9%84%D9%82%D8%AF%D8%B3%20%D9%81%D9%8A%20%D8%A7%D9%84%D8%B9%D9%87%D8%AF%20%D8%A7%D9%84%D8%A3%D8%B1%D8%AF%D9%86%D9%8A%20%281948_1967%29.pdf
 * 3. https://www.wafa.ps/ar_page.aspx?id=N3i8Tma706349199468aN3i8Tm
 * 4. https://www.aljazeera.net/opinions/2016/4/3/%d8%a8%d9%84%d8%af%d9%8a%d8%a9-%d8%a7%d9%84%d9%82%d8%af%d8%b3-%d8%aa%d8%b7%d9%88%d8%b1-%d8%ad%d8%af%d9%88%d8%af%d9%87%d8%a7-%d8%a8%d8%a7%d9%84%d8%b7%d8%b1%d8%af
 * 5. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mayor_of_Jerusalem#List_of_Mayors_of_Jerusalem_(1845%E2%80%93present)
 * also the rest of the section have cited infomration.
 * The article should be approved in this case as i removed the other info until i get the books from the archive department. Mohdw04 (talk) 20:56, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * @S0091@Theroadislong
 * you can see all of the info in references added in the way you requested, please check them before declining without checking :) Mohdw04 (talk) 20:58, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * There are still 4 unsourced sections. Theroadislong (talk) 21:00, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I only see one: Family Life which i think is ok not be cited... Mohdw04 (talk) 21:10, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * It sounds like you started "backwards", meaning you started with what you know before gathering all the relevant sources. You should start with sources first, then summarize what those source say about the subject.  Even with the sources you added, I still do not see in-depth coverage about him.  Another reviewer will take a look, but please post on the draft's talk page three sources the have written about him in-depth (paragraphs about him, not just brief mentions) to help the next reviewer.  See WP:THREE for guidance. S0091 (talk) 21:24, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * The “Early life” section, the “Practical life during the British Mandate period” section, the” Later life“ section and the “Family Life’ section are all unsourced. Theroadislong (talk) 21:28, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Well, i just feel only two person are trying to approve this article. and I sense there is political issue behind it.
 * To serve the goal, i decided to cut the debate and remove the other information so the article can get approved.
 * That's why, i am asking to approve the article... Mohdw04 (talk) 21:29, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * @S0091@Theroadislonghow can i tag Wikipedia moderators?
 * i think the article at the moment has the relevant sources :) Mohdw04 (talk) 21:30, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I mean even after i removed many of the content, the article has not 10 resources. I really don't see any reason why it should not be approved.
 * Can you please tag moderators? i feel its not fair. Mohdw04 (talk) 21:32, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * > I mean even after i removed many of the content, the article has not 10 resources
 * now* instead of "not" Mohdw04 (talk) 21:32, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia does not have "moderators" but another reviewer will take a look at the article. I still do highly recommend posting the three sources as I suggested above on the draft's talk page to help the next reviewer. I will not review the draft again and I doubt @Theroadislong will either.  In the interim, if you have questions or need help, you can ask at the Teahouse. S0091 (talk) 21:50, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Omar Elwary has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Omar Elwary. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 21:29, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Omar Elwary has been accepted
 Omar Elwary, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! Theroadislong (talk) 21:36, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your efforts :) Mohdw04 (talk) 21:40, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I created a redirect for Omar Wa'ari to connect it to Omar Elwary given that is how he is referred to in existing articles. S0091 (talk) 22:09, 1 October 2022 (UTC)