User talk:Moist towelett/Archives/2015/August

Draft:Proyecto ContraSIDA por Vida
Hi Rhumidian. When you declined this as not English you then (correctly) retracted the decline since it is in English, but didn't talk to the editor or re-submit the article for AfC. Just wanted to point this out, they just came into the live help channel very confused about the whole thing. Sam Walton (talk) 16:10, 10 August 2015 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rockville_2069:_A_Rock_Musical
Hi,

I have reviewed all comments and feedback and believe to have addressed all previous issues, can you be a bit more specific about your concerns?

154.69.163.58 (talk) 07:08, 11 August 2015 (UTC)PlayDough23 August, 11154.69.163.58 (talk) 07:08, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Hi, It reads like an advertisement. See the plot section.Rhumidian (talk) 15:49, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

When I first submitted, some comments were that the article was promotional and I resubmitted believing that I had addressed this. It was not raised again. I do not have a "plot" section so could you be so kind as to point out which sections of the article you are referring to? Are you referring to the "story" in the article? 154.69.163.58 (talk) 07:44, 14 August 2015 (UTC)PlayDough23 14 Aug 2015154.69.163.58 (talk) 07:44, 14 August 2015 (UTC)