User talk:Mojopin23/Sandbox

Speedy-delete {holdon}
Luminous March Mojopin23 (talk) 05:09, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

(cpmv'd from article)

We are an independent band that is simply trying to improve our accesibility to people who are fans of our music. This is not a promotional vehicle. It is simply a space where people can be informed of what the band's background is, and who the members are. Thus, it can be argued that we have a page that is identical to any other band page on wikipedia. Everything that has been written and included on this page has been verified and constructed by an impartial party. If references are needed, we are happy to oblige. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mojopin23 (talk • contribs) 04:47, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


 * ok. Pointers on how to turn this into something solid will be forthcoming... :) -- Fullstop (talk) 05:15, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


 * I will shortly be (temporarily) moving the article to your own sandbox as long as the article is under development. Otherwise the delete tag would need to stay, and so could end up being deleted anyway. -- Fullstop (talk) 05:22, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok, the article and the corresponding talk page are now in your sandbox, where you can knock it into shape (so that it doesn't get deleted) before moving it back into the main space. I'll continue the discussion on your talk page from here. -- Fullstop (talk) 05:34, 21 May 2008 (UTC)

{holdon} Could you please inform me of what is exactly unacceptable about the current article? I can make the changes if they are noted. However, i am currently unsure of what needs to be altered to prevent deletion. Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mojopin23 (talk • contribs) 14:40, 21 May 2008 (UTC)