User talk:Mokent23/Evaluate an Article

I like the article you picked! Very good evaluation. I completely agree that the lead to this article is a bit much. Rather than lead with American Football's origins, that should be moved down to the section discussing its early history. That paragraph and the one following it should be cut from the lead and moved elsewhere to make the article's intro flow better. Other than that, it's a solid article and this is a solid evaluation! ConnorReidVinson (talk) 21:33, 9 June 2020 (UTC) Connor Vinson