User talk:Mollie louiseee/sandbox

Claudia's Peer Review
The information presented was good, however, i would suggest actually summarizing the article rather than directly quoting from one source. I would say add examples of those who are marginalized in Ethiopia. Fioreclaudia (talk) 22:05, 18 October 2018 (UTC) Fioreclaudia
 * Thank you for the insight on my article! I do agree that I need a more comprehensive summary of my article. I will look over the direct quotes and provide my own summary on the facts provided. I will also try to find more direct examples and sources to provide better insight on the topic.

Mollie louiseee (talk) 23:09, 18 October 2018 (UTC) mollie_louiseee