User talk:Molly.f.hughes/sandbox

HI MOLLY -

TERRIFIC JOB ON THIS!! YOU HAVE HAVE FILLED OUT QUITE A BIT FROM THE ORIGINAL ARTICLE. I THINK KEEPING THE STRUCTURE THE SAME MAKES A LOT OF SENSE. SO, WHAT I THINK THIS ARTICLE NEEDS NOW IS MORE DETAILS FOR READERS WHO KNOW NOTHING ABOUT THE FRENCH AND INDIAN WAR. THE EXISTING ARTICLE DOESN'T PROVIDE ANY HELPFUL BACKGROUND. IT ALSO NEEDS MORE ABOUT WHAT WAS SIGNIFICANT ABOUT THE END OF THE WAR AND WHAT TRENT DOES AFTER. YOU JUST NEED TO FINISH THE STORY THAT JUST SORT OF TRAILS OFF IN THE ORIGINAL VERSION. SECOND, YOU NEED MORE SOURCES AND CITATIONS. I REALIZE THIS IS HARD WITH NO LIBRARY, BUT THERE IS A LOT OF STUFF THAT IS ONLINE AND AVAILABLE TO US THROUGH THE OU LIBRARY WEBSITE. THINK UP SOME KEYWORD SEARCHES TO USE AND JUST TYPE THOSE INTO THE SEARCH BOXES. YOU CAN ALSO SEARCH FOR OTHER TRADERS AND THE NAMES OF FORTS. WE HAVE ONLINE ACCESS TO ALMOST EVERY ARTICLE THAT WAS WRITTEN AND TO A LOT OF OLDER BOOKS, SO THAT IS THE NEXT BIG STEP FOR YOU.

YOU CAN DECIDE IF YOU WANT TO ADD SOME MAPS AND IMAGES, BUT I THINK EVERYONE LIKES THOSE. KEEP GOING. ..

ANNE HYDEAfh1858 (talk) 21:08, 9 April 2020 (UTC)