User talk:MollyDenning

Welcome!
Hello, MollyDenning, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:47, 1 September 2023 (UTC)

Repetition
Hi. Here you said that you updated the intro with more information but, in reality, you just produced repetition. It's one thing to summarize a portion of the article and add that to the WP:LEAD (the introduction that should ideally never be anything but a summary), and it's something else to simply copy and paraphrase without summarizing. The way the article was laid out with a seeming "intro" probably caused you to believe that the "intro" should have all the important information. But articles should never repeat themselves. Short articles in which there isn't enough content to summarize in the first place usually don't need any sections, and usually can't sustain a lead-body distinction. In reality, there was no intro there. That heading separating some paragraphs from others was completely arbitrary, and I've removed it. Sincerely —Alalch E. 00:05, 15 November 2023 (UTC)