User talk:Momoney2001/Tchoupitoulas Str

I have reviewed your article. Inspiration 2.0 (talk) 19:26, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello, this is Laeh and I have completed your peer review. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Laeh101 (talk • contribs) 19:37, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

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You're off to a good start with content, although there's plenty more to consider. Right now, though, you are failing to cite any of your sources, and that is simply unacceptable. You're claiming all this as your own knowledge, which it is not.

Remember, as discussed in class, you have to change the tone of your writing. This is not a tourist brochure. It is a factual, neutral report. The language you use right now is something you'd write in an email to a friend thinking about visiting New Orleans.

JT: (talk) 16:32, 10 March 2021 (UTC)