User talk:Monaghju/sandbox

Three things you did well in your article:

1)	We really like the descriptive introduction. Great quotes and good use of language, it is a nice way to open up the article. Good quotes throughout the article as well. (Alleman-Ghionda) 2)	Good clarifying examples. How one culture has one word for something and another has different word, making slightly different meanings. 3)	All around very descriptive and well constructed language. You use colorful words that elaborate on the language and personality. We also like the use of many book sources to support your points.

-From Suzie and Brianna

Scscordino (talk) 01:05, 19 November 2012 (UTC)